Monday, October 1, 2007

Illusive Temptation

The nymph of moon is dancing with the sun;
She is tempting the sapphire ocean,
Luring the high snow-white peak
To commit the sin of neurotic devastation;

She’s tapping her delicate feet and waist
With the eerie melody which
Wind makes while kissing oaks;
The chill of winter breeze is doing the rest.

The poor sea waves are suffering low tide,
Sheer observer of her enigmatic salsa;
They are in touch with warm sand
Exposing their body in mannish pride.

The lunar nymph winks even to the cloud;
The free winter cloud ceases and
Exotic enticement forces it to drop
Those drops it was holding to redistribute.

The sprite gambles her intoxicating eyes
To the planets, comets and stars;
What a sumptuous delusive charm!
She captivates with her feminine disguise.

The hallucinated snow peak obsessively
Touch her seductive navel;
Fancy his glossy cheeks to
Slides down her perfect curves fervently.

The possessive sun gags out his tolerance,
Spites off his radiance to
The unruly longing peak
And the sheet of ice loses its residence.

The nymph vanishes, arousing eroticism
In all masculine power of nature;
Alas, the impeccable amorous earth
Famine and flood dented her clear prism.



-littleWriter

13 comments:

whizkid said...

Nice Poem... keep the good work up!

Cold & Silent..... said...

temptations wudn't remain tempting if they weren't illusions... :)
nice work... :)

pink biskitt said...

my first time here.am new to the blog world.
nice work little writer :)

s.H.a.S.h.I said...

wow dude.. really good..
hows life btw.. hey had one question.. how much do u earn in adsense.??

shashi said...

lol.. no re.. just had a dream bout a gal who was sick....
well the idea of patient n doctor is also not bad... karan johar mite love to make a senti love story on it.. :)

Shivnita said...

A good write.. (Illusive temptation)

Thanks for the comment..

but i believe in writing spontaneously, hence must have missed out on the rhyme scheme.. don't concentrate on it much in any case though..

Shivnita said...

You haven't left an email id...

in any case, God's Best Gift is from the li'l infants point of view.. An infant who has not come into this world.. in finer terms, its about a mother aborting her live unborn child.

preetilata said...

ki je bolbo..bujhte parchi na..sotti khub bhalo legeche...ekta romnticism..ekta eroticism acche but tar sathe sathe ekta deep reality o jodiye acche..taina!!..khub bhalo laglo
sottie bolbo ..choker samne chobi bheshe utheche..i cn visualize d scean..
aaro lekho

bhalo theko
:) :) :)

C R D said...

fine play of words.. good job

INDR's Angels said...

that's brilliant and wonderful imagery used...
U have an unconventional form of expressing the art , which will give u a niche audience always..
;_)
cheers

Weekend Warrior said...

Nice poem and nice images too.

~ littleWriter ~ said...

Thanking all my friends for going thru my work... see you soon... :)

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