When my specs turn smoggy
With the mist of sweltering tears,
When the mantle of lonesomeness
Grows to be too heavy to bear-
When my tedious compulsions
Flavour like a festering sausage,
When the thought of bondage
Panics even my mirror image-
When the blunt shaving razor
Slides deep into rough cheek,
When my last water bottle
Deceives leaking in a desert trip-
When my boorish supervisor
Threatens for my resignation,
When I satisfy boss’ other half
To safeguard my designation-
When the long dead ancestors
Visit on my mournful recall,
When my interminable voracity
Silently invites my downfall-
When I set for a far away voyage
And lose compass in mid ocean,
When I howl in burning twinge
Having lost the soothing lotion-
When I find my favourite novel
Half munched by creepy-crawlies,
When I miss a golden prospect
By any of my ill-timed follies-
When I fail to trace a cathedral
For confessing overflowing sin,
When I lose a must win contest
Put up with winner rival’s grin-
When I rush to station but miss
The fleeting train by a second’s luck,
When I hear of my friend’s demise
And drop down like a dead duck-
Then…………………………………………?
I sail the boat of discontent in my mind’s sea,
The vessel floats aimlessly in search of thee-
Thy music from deep coral beds heals my ears,
Wet breeze encasing your kiss drinks my tears-
Your aroma intoxicates me like illusive morphine
Making me oblivious of all agonizing happenings-
The same fragrance wakes me up when I’m drunk,
While you are my anchor, I won’t ever get sunk-
I glimpse at a green dot like island from my craft,
There waits my pensive Suzan with a red tulip tuft.
With the mist of sweltering tears,
When the mantle of lonesomeness
Grows to be too heavy to bear-
When my tedious compulsions
Flavour like a festering sausage,
When the thought of bondage
Panics even my mirror image-
When the blunt shaving razor
Slides deep into rough cheek,
When my last water bottle
Deceives leaking in a desert trip-
When my boorish supervisor
Threatens for my resignation,
When I satisfy boss’ other half
To safeguard my designation-
When the long dead ancestors
Visit on my mournful recall,
When my interminable voracity
Silently invites my downfall-
When I set for a far away voyage
And lose compass in mid ocean,
When I howl in burning twinge
Having lost the soothing lotion-
When I find my favourite novel
Half munched by creepy-crawlies,
When I miss a golden prospect
By any of my ill-timed follies-
When I fail to trace a cathedral
For confessing overflowing sin,
When I lose a must win contest
Put up with winner rival’s grin-
When I rush to station but miss
The fleeting train by a second’s luck,
When I hear of my friend’s demise
And drop down like a dead duck-
Then…………………………………………?
I sail the boat of discontent in my mind’s sea,
The vessel floats aimlessly in search of thee-
Thy music from deep coral beds heals my ears,
Wet breeze encasing your kiss drinks my tears-
Your aroma intoxicates me like illusive morphine
Making me oblivious of all agonizing happenings-
The same fragrance wakes me up when I’m drunk,
While you are my anchor, I won’t ever get sunk-
I glimpse at a green dot like island from my craft,
There waits my pensive Suzan with a red tulip tuft.
-littleWriter
15 comments:
Hey buddy.. how ru?? this one was too good.. ure vocab is amazing.. :)
wowwwwwww. wat a cm bk
till nw wat i ws searching in ur poetry.. i hv found d glimpse of it hr 4 d ist time.
the whole poem is just brilliant. n my bst stanza is the "then..." stanza.
i cnt xpress in words how much i loved this poem. each n evry single word of "then..."
tk cr
:) :) :)
Lovely.. wonderful.. must say..
Quite liked it
Keep it up :)
i luv the vivid metaphors u use!
wow awsome,
The best one so far....
Ode to Susan..
:-)
Beauty..
if only we know how to play with this game of "if and then".....
cant just tell u hw much i liked this thing... :)
gr8 work.....
"When I rush to station but miss
The fleeting train by a second’s luck" --- Liked those lines ..
Nice n meloncholic ..
But y only sad poetries ? life aint that bad :)
Good poem... u write great... Keep them coming
who say dat u r "littleWriter" ?u r biggggggggggggggg boss marvelous poem
Beautiful poems - good use of words with an equally appreciable thought process. I wonder where you get your inspirations from!
Also went through your 'Kagoj Phul'. I'd suggest you to use Bengali script when posting. Keep up the good work!
:)
hi poet...u ve done a gr8 job ..go on
i loved ur blog! wanna exchange links???
very very nice!
bng a dusk person...i liked the pesive, melncholic tch in ur poems...keep writing...!!!
Thanking all my beloved readers/friends.
:) take care...
Hoping to see you all again n again...
really Beautiful poems...I am inspired...
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