Million gloomy faces
Billion sobbing eyes
The world upside down
Wish all were lies…
God’s evil fantasy
Distorted bricks and blue
Chapters out of cover
Fool has lost his glue…
Neither an ocean of cries will cure…
Just like drinking after losing your first love-
Nor Midas’ fingers can lure…
Just like getting your son’s insurance money-
Virginity once lost is lost for sure…
Still don’t lose hope-
Moment this dark cloud dissolves every sunshine will be yours…
Billion sobbing eyes
The world upside down
Wish all were lies…
God’s evil fantasy
Distorted bricks and blue
Chapters out of cover
Fool has lost his glue…
Neither an ocean of cries will cure…
Just like drinking after losing your first love-
Nor Midas’ fingers can lure…
Just like getting your son’s insurance money-
Virginity once lost is lost for sure…
Still don’t lose hope-
Moment this dark cloud dissolves every sunshine will be yours…
- littleWriter
18 comments:
This needs a worldwide appalause and ami baje bokchi na.... Ami khuuubb i impresssed for all the lines and the profound thoughts...
Pore aro likbo, time ektu kom ekhun... And abar porbo...
I love this poem, its so deep and intriging - well done!!!
Nice attempt by showing sorrow through poem for Haiti people.
a very very nice poem
emotional poem
loved the poem..my sympathies to the Haiti...
hope everything would be normalised...!
Truly heart touching.... full of emotions....
I am moved by the last lines... its the human nature and the survival instinct that inspires us to write line like thi...
"Moment this dark cloud dissolves every sunshine will be yours"
God bless
nice poetry and gud msg there... :)
Bro this poem is small in size but huge in meaning... Yes we just need to have faith in god, a destruction precedes every construction. Its said that so many people lost their lives. But we should be thankful to god that it doesnt happen in our city or in our country. And that teaches us to love each other and thankful to god for every extra day he gives us.
Lovely blog, reading your poems and these are pretty nice.
:)
touching, u write bro....!!
u captured the feeling of Haiti disaster with such few words... your poem speaks volumes of the pain they are undergoing.. last line is very beautiful.. shows that every cloud has a silver lining... keep writing dude.. u rock..
Not much into poetry, but I kinda liked it... Last line is very good.
great poem
waiting for a new one
woho..awesome....keep up d good work..!
Wow....its aweesummmm...words are lovely weaved revealing deeper emotions finally coming put as poem ! loved it !
awesome... gr8 work!!!
great!
So very emotional and touching! My favorite line from your post - "Just like getting your son’s insurance money"... Great one... The one thing I always wanted to do was to write poetry, and that is something I've never been able to! Keep em coming!
Cheers,
WoW...nice :)
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