
Wet in the crimson golden farewell rays
I witnessed the loveliest twilight,
Boogied with a swinging chime-
Then the night followed…
So many
Volcanoes erupted against anticipation,
Oceans sipped blood on moon’s seduction,
Castles emulsified by quaky annihilation,
All the creations suffered immature extinction-
Alas my sunset dreams and swiveling wind chime…
Now I’m deaf, I’m blind-
Forgotten to cry, can’t remember how to rhyme;
Dig the dark shadow when I’m awake but
Till now in my sleep I long to perceive that chime…
-littleWriter
6 comments:
awesome :)
Dramatic indeed, but ultimately sad, as unfulfillment of anticipations bring.
I liked that 'crimson gold farewell rays' part.
sad but true, n very well written!
da girl's hand is nice
da guy seems to be so wise
his hand is not so nice
running to momma he cries
u have sum whacky rymes
if u hurt my friend u will need sum ice
dont come after me, im just a probability which comes in a dice
so long my little writer, u bag of little lies
just my two cents
just for you
:D
WITH LOTS OF LOVE
4m
kushinagar
and sankhassa
grt.... :)
besh bhalo laglo... :)
like " Anonymous said..." cool
YOU 2 ;p
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